winter

兰花或者艾草

winter

winter is even better
wind sometimes bitter
road face is dry and blue white
dust is blowed far away
trees with no leaves left
only sticks and trunks in the mist
all is the bleak scene
but the view is wide and clear

half of the people hide at home
with thick coats and eyes deep
I'm growing thinner
finger joints protrude under the skin
episodes of back pain like sparks
inspire my gloom mood
the woman next to me
binds her long hair with a red string
puts on a pair of black cotton glove
and then makes a long loud yawn
outside the bus window
strangers in a hurry
it is a busy world driven by fuel
of oil and coal
forgive me
I'm just a little reminiscent

today is the January the first
there are many lovers getting married
and now I'm leaving for my cousin's wedding
the course from city to countryside
will take two hours at least
so it is enough for me
to weave a story round the conversation
with a girl last week
it was about a classmate of her childhood
who was born with congenital heart disease
"her lips are always purple."
"her parents brought her a brother
when they were told she would die someday
sooner or later by the doctor"
"so she was left to her poor grandma until now"
"she had three abortion and now looks like an old man
although just 21 years old"

文壮飞

so it is enough for me
to weave a story round the conversation
with a girl last week


待有时间我来译一下，有不少好句子

云梦心曲

原帖由 兰花或者艾草 于 2007-1-3 17:55 发表
winter

winter is even better
wind sometimes bitter
road face is dry and blue white
dust is blowed far away
trees with no leaves left
only sticks and trunks in the mist
all is the bleak sce ...

问妹妹好！还是译成中文吧。

荒芜梦话

这首诗，第一节是对冬的描写，后面是一个女孩子的冬天，"she had three abortion and now looks like an old man
although just 21 years old" 也是对社会生活中的一种思考吧，
  
一首好诗，问好 兰花或者艾草

红山

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兰花或者艾草

bullshit

蓝田玉

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原帖由 兰花或者艾草 于 2007-1-3 22:12 发表
bullshit

朋友，请尊重别人，用“bullshit”不太礼貌