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61jiess 发表于 2025-6-8 16:41
哈哈。这就是各花入各眼。就我要表达的而言 这一行不可少

嗯嗯，对作者而言，”表达“至关重要。我只是从读者和个人偏好的角度评论。
我喜欢茨维塔耶娃那首《我想和你一起生活》，尤其是”此刻若你不爱我，我也不会在意“那句。

这里有阳光

61jiess 发表于 2025-6-8 16:40
问好。第一个能明白你说的主观的意味，不过主观是必须的。这个场景的二重性第一是第一人称在卧室中摊倒后 ...

我阅读感觉主观，文本是否需要这些主观由作者和阅读者来决定

金水

總覺得你就是頭像中那人
如此寫如此的詩
～～

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金水 发表于 2025-6-8 22:33
總覺得你就是頭像中那人
如此寫如此的詩
～～

"Evening on Karl Johan Street" by Edvard Munch
Munch painted this scene in 1892, and it is considered an iconic work that reflects the artist's exploration of themes such as life, fear, and melancholia.

Do you still think he has a similar vibe to the person in the painting?

金水

白云无尽时 发表于 2025-6-8 22:50
"Evening on Karl Johan Street" by Edvard Munch
Munch painted this scene in 1892, and it is consid ...

他詩中總有絲絲縷縷的melancholia呀

金水

白云无尽时 发表于 2025-6-8 22:50
"Evening on Karl Johan Street" by Edvard Munch
Munch painted this scene in 1892, and it is consid ...

according to Galen，there are four temperaments: sanguine, choleric，melancholic，and phlegmatic.

which one do you think he is closer to～～

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金水 发表于 2025-6-8 23:49
according to Galen，there are four temperaments: sanguine, choleric，melancholic，and phlegmatic.
...

melancholic, u r right.

余梦江河

很细微情思流动，却又点穴般挖潜。