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秋水雁影

竟然如此隽永

静听夜雨

第一个前半部分，我自己觉得还好，后半部分，特别是结尾，我觉得不好。
第二个翻译到“多情却被无情恼”被卡住了，没有兴致继续，嘿嘿，就剩了上阕。
第三个纯粹瞎说，古体诗词，我一点不懂。

谢谢秋水雁影的夸奖。不过还真好玩。

静听夜雨

真好玩，真好玩。

静听夜雨

墙里秋千墙外道。墙外行人，墙里佳人笑。笑渐不闻声渐悄，多情却被无情恼。
胡乱凑凑：

When I am walking along the spring lane
A lady’s chuckling through a wall into my ears.
How I wish my eyes were with hers
But on her swing, inside the wall she is
Why am I feeling a bit sad while her voice is wandering,
weltering,and slowly disappearing .
Is this affection nothing but only a little trance

静听夜雨

《蝶恋花》

花褪残红青杏小。燕子飞时，绿水人家绕。枝上柳绵吹又少，天涯何处无芳草！

墙里秋千墙外道。墙外行人，墙里佳人笑。笑渐不闻声渐悄，多情却被无情恼。

The butterfly and the flower

When all the blooms are faded and gone,
the green apricots look pretty and small.
A swallow is leaving the bough for a little cottage ,
which is surrounded by a stream , shining ,as you can recall.
The willow catkins are drifting away into the skyline ,
Where are your beauty and fragrance?
they are here and there among the green grass

When I am walking along the spring lane
A lady’s chuckling through a wall into my ears.
How I wish my eyes were with hers
But on her swing, inside the wall she is
Why am I feeling a bit sad while her voice is wandering,
weltering,and slowly disappearing .
Is this affection nothing but only a little trance

静听夜雨

终于牵强附会好了。

见闻

呵呵，什么都要玩玩的。

静听夜雨

呵呵，耍大刀的，在关公面前。

杨兴昌

原帖由 静听夜雨 于 2008-10-6 12:55 发表
《诉衷情》

夜来沈醉卸妆迟。梅萼插残枝。酒醒熏破春睡，梦远不成归。
人悄悄，月依依。翠帘垂。更挼残蕊，更捻余香，更得些时。

正当其时。

静听夜雨

原帖由 杨兴昌 于 2008-11-3 13:45 发表



正当其时。

呵呵，那当然。今天翻译了一首诗歌，最后一句不会翻译，正好向你求教，也顺便请你看看当不当时。

More geese than swans now live, more fools than wise.

先谢谢了。

[ 本帖最后由 静听夜雨 于 2008-11-3 19:39 编辑 ]