subway diary series

小艾 · 发表于 2010-8-20 11:08

subway diary series

step 1

the smoking man

he lit a cigarette
because of the lonely night
as empty as his mind
smoke flying out of his lips
like ink
diffusing in the water glass
between his fingers
was the red dot
nearly coming to an end.
he frowned
because of the silence of death
feathery and thick
almost swirling his soul
into the air of this empty night.

半只眼 · 发表于 2010-8-20 11:15

一个小情绪，语感控制还行。结尾有点水。

哈哈，其实我一个字都不懂

白樱 · 发表于 2010-8-20 12:04

来读英语
不懂也得装一下！
这个夜晚有些孤独嘛

醉猫 · 发表于 2010-8-20 12:22

我继续装！
有些啰嗦~~~~

风雨青衫 · 发表于 2010-8-20 14:26

原来是英文，我就说怎么拼音都不准呵哈哈

宇宙深处 · 发表于 2010-8-20 17:51

对不起，能有中文就好了！

敏儿 · 发表于 2010-8-21 15:17

呵呵，英文诗歌读的少啊，咱来读读中式的英文诗，也不懂装懂吧！

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