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Kindness lie

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发表于 2009-9-2 10:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Oh baby,my sweetheart
you’ve promised that
you’d get where i am staying
At that very special day
just for having a dinner with me
sharing the color of the night together
you’d understand
those be sure to satisfy me
but at last
you did not turn it true
dinner though delicious but no appetite
night though pretty but no appreciation
how disappointed I was
what a heart-broken pain I suffered
how could I expresse what I felt
the only thing I could do was
to bury all inside my own heart.

oh baby,my sweetheart.
you disappeared without any trace
like a needle thrown in the ocean
though it is impossible
it can’t stop me from asking
could you tell me
why you changed your mind
cos’ that was what we had settled
when could you give me a sound explanation
cos’ there is no answer for that at all.
and what are you thinking of now
cos’ I am wondering
do you still love me
again where are you for the time being
cos’ I am anxious to know
if you are stiil mine

oh baby , my sweetheart
in the process of pains
gradually I knew these
in the game of our love
I took everything seriously
but you took them for fun
I was strict with myself on it
but you let it and yourself be
for love I devoted my own body
but you just made use of your shadow
and in return
you brought me deep sorrow instead
even worse sent me no sincerely sorry
let alone a gesture of bye-bye
cos’ now for me
it is just a luxury expectation forever


yet heart changed
then all those followed
none could prohibit
the only future is to
leave me alone more than let me down
cos’ it is nothing
having suffered several times
how about once more
the only lesson I learnt is
don’t believe in what a person said
but trust what you’ve seen
kindness lie ,though kindful at first
might kill you at last
without a preword of hello

there is nothing worth doing
there is no one worth waiting
there is no heart-beating worth feeling
there is no love worth treasuring
yet it seems that
there is still a new chance for me
must I take
without any hesitation
let God decide me
I dare not any longer
since then

[ 本帖最后由 长河浪 于 2009-9-3 18:42 编辑 ]
发表于 2009-9-2 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
啊~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-9-2 11:25 | 显示全部楼层
不好意思。
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发表于 2009-9-2 11:54 | 显示全部楼层
前边的文字很美,不过最后的结论可不好,你不可以因为一个人的谎言而认为全世界的爱情都是假的,无需再珍惜。

因为语言的距离,所以当我读着这些诗句的时候会产生距离的美感。如果把这首诗歌翻译成中文,就会失去其本来的味道。

只是我们在这里看惯了方块字,你突然在这里写下这么多英文,可能会让人觉得思维一时难以转换,而且并不是每一个人都看得懂:)

问候你,长河浪~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-9-3 10:04 | 显示全部楼层

回复 4# 的帖子

星星小倩:
    正因为习惯了方块字,来点英文不妨作为一种美丽的意外。对外开放30年了,年轻人都有一定的英文基础,要学看英语诗歌,慢慢看吧。这会逐渐成为一种时尚的。感谢你的阅读和评点。
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发表于 2009-9-4 14:35 | 显示全部楼层
恩,美丽的意外,主餐之后偶尔的Desserts:)
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