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小艾

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这场雨
可真单调
冬不冬
秋不秋
杂货店窗口
一张油纸撑在外面
玻璃下
整齐地压着香烟
一盒一盒的
红蓝白紫
四个男人
两个穿着皮茄克
在堂屋
围着八仙桌打扑克
我路过时
铁桥两边的小饭店
都已经熄灯打烊
惟有这家杂货店
象个碉堡
里面一定温暖
又安全

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the rain
so dull
not cold enough as winter
not bleak enough as fall
a piece of plastic paper
spread on the windowsill
of the store
under the glass
packs of cigarette
arranged in order
red blue white purple
four men
two of them in leather coat
in another room
surrounding a square table
playing cards
when i passed by
all restaurants
beside the steel bridge
closed and dark
only this small store
like a blockhouse
it must be warm
and secure inside

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没了诗歌的特质。

文壮飞

the rain
so dull
not cold enough as winter
not bleak enough as fall
a piece of plastic paper
spread on the windowsill
of the store

英语这里开头写得好,读来有感觉

小艾

谢谢!